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Hurricane Wind Chimes

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Dusk settles as dust and cloaks her in tangible vulnerabilities.
Clavicles creak like weary attics, where molting untruths rest.

Anemia is giving more than you've got.
            (That's why I am wasting away.)
Sea glass is nothing more than sugar-coated catastrophe.
            (I can relate.)

We're all teeming with gust-flavored doubt, which is really too bad.
We should learn from the rain-drops, grappling and eloping on cheeks and chins.

In the end, everything is okay.
"And only surrender will help you now."
© 2010 - 2024 londonrey
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CyneNoir's avatar
Wow. The way the last line managed to contrast so starkly with the rest of the poem and yet retain the same tone/mood is fascinating and beautiful. "Anemia is giving more than you've got" is probably one of my favorite lines in there. It's so simple but hold so much feeling and meaning. :heart:

Would you happen to know the bands Manchester Orchestra or Iron and Wine? I have a feeling you'd like them (or at least their lyrics).