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I took the flowers from your stone, ripped off their heads
and braided them into my curls.
partly because you didn't deserve them,
mostly because you'd always loved being in my hair.
I know who you are.
you're me, or something like it.
and I knew who you were,
but not really.
a contradiction,
scourged with a pulse.
the only way out
is the way we came in,
and we've been here so long
that that path is gone.
remind me to give you the next thing
I plan on losing.
letting go is the hardest thing
I have ever done.
I think that's why
I haven't yet.
and braided them into my curls.
partly because you didn't deserve them,
mostly because you'd always loved being in my hair.
I know who you are.
you're me, or something like it.
and I knew who you were,
but not really.
a contradiction,
scourged with a pulse.
the only way out
is the way we came in,
and we've been here so long
that that path is gone.
remind me to give you the next thing
I plan on losing.
letting go is the hardest thing
I have ever done.
I think that's why
I haven't yet.
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i was going to ask you to hold back my hair
if i started to heave
but it's cut in mourning
for the fawns dying under the chalky
moist hands of children,
in mourning for newspaper print
threatening suicide off the tips of your eyelashes,
saying things like
i could fall faster
i could convert more
i could shine my face brighter than your sands
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parabola.
You just don't get it, do you?
Every time I set fire to this paper,
I am screaming the words that I beg you to hear,
but you cast them away
or don't understand
or just try to pretend they're not
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Fallacious
You believe you
speak of truth
yet all I see
is contradiction.
Your acid tongue
lashes out,
leaving boils
on my skin
for every single
word you've spoken.
These lies
you tell
cannot provide
redemption.
You can only
manufacture
so much of
your own reality
before you're
forced to
break mirrors
just to save face.
-Brian Shuffett
June 29th, 2010
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I'm not going to comment on this one yet. I'm saving it in my favourites for a rainy day.